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That was really the hottest thing I've read in a long time! I'm laying on the floor and my hips just started pumping when Sora started getting his pretty little ass fucked. That was really good and you should make lots more chapters.

you've killed me ded. that was...to say in the least, fucking brilliant. the best smut i've read in a while, by far. i hope you'll write more? if not of this, than of something else. you're a fabulous writer. *sops up her nosebleed*

Yesss! MY FAVORITE SMUT-AUTHOR HAS RETURNED FROM THE GRAVE!!!!!! Im serious about it. Smut fics might be smut fics, but yours rises SOO much above the boundaries. Instead of a halfass story with halfass smut, its FULL ON SMUT SMUT SMUT, and it's definitely your strength. I CANNOT POSSIBLE EXPRESS my excitement at the moment, and you have the full support of me, I assure you. There are no words to explain how great the sex is, man. SOOO....URGGH....AuUGHGUHuafuGHUGHuoweljdgolgjkgjolwjgwdgidj

Usually i'm able to make a coherent review instead of this blabber but I'm unable to due to the abundance of excitement in my belly to know that YOU'VE COME BACK!!111!111 No'one and I MEAN NO'ONE has evn come CLOSE to this PIECE OF ART! I TAKE BACK THE PORN COMMENT, IT'S ART, DAMMIT!!!!

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I CAN'T WAIT! CHRISTMAS HAS COME EARLY !!! XD XD XD

(welcome back, man. I hope to see chapter 2 in the future :) )

O.O Wow That was totally hot!! Your really good! 5/5!!

This was way hot. You have to write more. Lots more!

O_O XD kyahhhh!!!! omg omg omg!!! soooooo hott!!!!!...*snerk* Sephie!!!!! PLEASEEEEEE continue!!!!!!

That was really good for your first fic. I mean, wow. Not many people even attempt a smut fic for their first go but you came out with a foursome. Beautiful. I noticed a few grammer problems, but nothing a good beta wouldn't be able to fix. I think you should go for a sequel. I'd read it, that's for sure.

well, I think I have some drool forming over here. that was the best orgy I've ever read I think. And I hope there will be more to come? but poor sora, i know it must hurt to have 2 inside him at once...not that I know anything about that. XD

+.+ so hawt! X3 (satisfied sigh) so next time i have a fix know that i'll be reading this to satisfy me ;P if you make one with seph and sora i'll be sure to read and review it. great work!

You. Are. A. GOD!