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person gloria stone
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK oh please oh please of please keep writing this.
Its awesome and you are such a wonderful writer.
I love RVB, and I love fanfiction so...it makes since I love the combination :)
anyway please update soon.
person Navis
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor caboose getting abused like that by his felllow rookies. “My father told me that I am not gay pretty Donut. Sorry.” is a great line.

Why haven't you posted this on RvB_Slash?
person dark_shinobi420
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is a very well written and intriuging fic. It's realistic, which is always a plus; and I really enjoyed the way you depicted relations between all of the characters. I especially appreciated the slight mix of humour(ever so slight) and reality, so many Halo RvB fics lack that one little quality that makes it a great piece of fanfiction well worth the read. I'd also like to say that this is easily one of the best Halo fics all in all that I've read in a while.Very commendable work, keep the chapters coming! ;)
person Shuimm
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter... I'm at the edge of my seat...! I only recently started watching RvB, but I already love it so much. This fanfiction is just so great! I will beg at your feet for the next chapter.
Good luck!
person Lizz
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
iloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyou. omg it rocks ^^ please continue.
person Armadillo
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yessssss!
person DonJuan
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really need to continue this. This is the best Red vs. Blue fic. Ever.
person Lizz
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooh! pwease continue? You rock, seriously. It's interesting to see RvB from a more serious onlook than the funny/constant joking (altho that seriously kicks ass too...) but it's cool like that. I started one, but I never thought of where to post it... oh well. Please continue! You're fun! Like whoa! *gives you cookies* or if you can't update, could you send it to me or something? Pleeeeeeeeeeeease? *puppy dog eyes*
person elll_art
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting to find a fanfic with a more serious tone when it comes to RvB. Interesting in a good way. You've done a really good job with the characters. It's hard to write characters who are usually not very serious into something serious, but well done!
person Navis
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot!!!! How long till theres More!!!!! More is needed!!!