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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fan ficition I've ever read. Actually its the best thing I've ever read and I\m straight! I know its been like 5 years but please look back and this and finnish it I beg you the story you have set up is just far to good to leave unconcluded!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited! I cannot wait for your next chapter. It looks so good! All your plot bunnies are great and I enjoy your writing style. I can't wait to see some hookups, mhm. Awesome work!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG this is amazing! It's my favorite RVB story EVER!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Pokes* I want the next chapter.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really love this story. I'm glad you aren't like the other writers and just trying to make a slash fic that involves the usual stupidity of RedvsBlue. cause no one can come close to the writing that those guys do. I really like to see a more serious take on the whole 'what if Donut was really gay' idea. ^_^ rock on!! please update.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i wants to read more
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update soon? You've got a great plot going- it's amazing to see RvsB with a serious tone for once. Anyway, update? Please?
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* when WILL you update? *taps fingernails impatiently* THis is too good to leave people hanging!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The rules state that fan fiction by definition awful, or worse. Especially when you get into the fringe stuff like cancelled shows, or small internet things. You however have show blatant disregard for these rules. As such I have no other choice than to report you to the appropriate agencies. Someone from your local FBI field office should contact you shortly.
I originally drifty into AFF wary. I'm don't hold fan fiction in high regards. The good stuff is usually buried under so much shit that it's not worth the effort. And that's when you remove the crappy sex stuff, because we all know that porn is just so well written. Needless to say when I saw the Halo/Red vs blue, I immediately thought WTF. It took me a moment to adjust to the fact that people really do beat off to everything under the sun. After that i decide I could use a good laugh, and open up all three stories there. The first two I indeed laughed. Then I read your story. A few week of impatiently waiting for the next chapter I've decided to talk.
Your writing is so good that story could just dissolve into Church and Tex ghost fucking while every one else getting into a penis pile, and I would still think this is good. I'm say that as a straight male, wow has no interest in reading about penis pile. From what I've read I almost fear that I would actually be really interested in how Caboose thrusts long and hard into Donut. That's something else entirely though. You're grammar and spelling right off the bat put you ahead of 90% of the fan fiction out there. You've got a good voice going to. What really captures me though is the way you've rounded out these flat comedic characters. Though some would say that the story is a little high on angst. Angst in of its self is not a bad thing, but there is such a thing a to much. All I would say is don't go off the angst deep end. Right now this is good angst, and oh what a rare jewel that is.
By the way, when are you going to get the next chapter up?
I originally drifty into AFF wary. I'm don't hold fan fiction in high regards. The good stuff is usually buried under so much shit that it's not worth the effort. And that's when you remove the crappy sex stuff, because we all know that porn is just so well written. Needless to say when I saw the Halo/Red vs blue, I immediately thought WTF. It took me a moment to adjust to the fact that people really do beat off to everything under the sun. After that i decide I could use a good laugh, and open up all three stories there. The first two I indeed laughed. Then I read your story. A few week of impatiently waiting for the next chapter I've decided to talk.
Your writing is so good that story could just dissolve into Church and Tex ghost fucking while every one else getting into a penis pile, and I would still think this is good. I'm say that as a straight male, wow has no interest in reading about penis pile. From what I've read I almost fear that I would actually be really interested in how Caboose thrusts long and hard into Donut. That's something else entirely though. You're grammar and spelling right off the bat put you ahead of 90% of the fan fiction out there. You've got a good voice going to. What really captures me though is the way you've rounded out these flat comedic characters. Though some would say that the story is a little high on angst. Angst in of its self is not a bad thing, but there is such a thing a to much. All I would say is don't go off the angst deep end. Right now this is good angst, and oh what a rare jewel that is.
By the way, when are you going to get the next chapter up?
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i can't wait for your next chappie! i love it!