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for ocarina of fuck

by advancedgamer14

person Admiring Author
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far. You have the writing of a skilled author, but i don't think you have completly fufilled your potential. i have seen many authors start off like you and improve and some even go on to become real authours. you've got the spark, fuel it.
person Death
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
funny story, keep going
person jozepy
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was very funny
the endind was the best
i feel the same way about the owl
person Zedrik
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehe, that was funny, allways wanted to chuck a rock or somthing at that stupied bird!!!!!
Well please continue soon!!!
person jeff
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great