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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what does blatant mean
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was pretty blatant
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rofl. that part w/ the owl made me burst into laughter!
bwahah!
nice stuff! keep it up!
bwahah!
nice stuff! keep it up!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, keep up the work man, i wanna see whats it like when he meets ruto
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meh, its decent, your spelling is atrocious, and while your scenes have premise, you blow through the sex really fast, its rushed and seems very immature.
There's potential, fix the grammer, then fix the progression and you may have something here.
There's potential, fix the grammer, then fix the progression and you may have something here.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should continue!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DON'T WRITE ANYMORE! I THINK IT IS BAD TO MAKE FUN OF ZElDA THIS WAY!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Story. Keep it going. I am interested in seeing where you are taking this plot line.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice storyline, keep up the good work and...nice way to express the feelings of the characters...
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice work, although I think you should put a little more detail into it. Anyways, keep the chapters coming