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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. God. Was this a gift for me, or something? I've just got home from my week away, craving the man-sex. This has just completely blown me away!
Gotta love the snarkiness that is Kratos & Zelos's relationship in whatever form. And there were some highly comical moments that made me laugh out loud, particularly in reference to Kratos's wardrobe, hehe. And the smex was...well, it sent shivers down my spine; I'm all hot and flustered now! I'm surprised you chose Kratos as uke (did I turn you?!) but I think it worked really well. The general dynamic between Kratos and Yuan, with neither of them particularly bothered by one another's actions (for the most part), was really IC, I thought, and kind of amusing, too. I find Kratos's lack of graciousness quite entertaining, and it was nice to see it brought to the bedroom like this.
I'm perfectly happy to take the blame for this appallingly smexy fic. ^__^ Oh, and Yggy/Zelos next? Oh yes. I'm waiting to see that one done well.
Gotta love the snarkiness that is Kratos & Zelos's relationship in whatever form. And there were some highly comical moments that made me laugh out loud, particularly in reference to Kratos's wardrobe, hehe. And the smex was...well, it sent shivers down my spine; I'm all hot and flustered now! I'm surprised you chose Kratos as uke (did I turn you?!) but I think it worked really well. The general dynamic between Kratos and Yuan, with neither of them particularly bothered by one another's actions (for the most part), was really IC, I thought, and kind of amusing, too. I find Kratos's lack of graciousness quite entertaining, and it was nice to see it brought to the bedroom like this.
I'm perfectly happy to take the blame for this appallingly smexy fic. ^__^ Oh, and Yggy/Zelos next? Oh yes. I'm waiting to see that one done well.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Best ToS porn EVER! Even though Yuan isn't really my fave character...
YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!! Zelos is hawt, so yeah... =3 I'd love to see a Kratos/Zelos, or a Yggdrasill/Zelos... I don't care which one, as long as it has Zelos in it ;)
YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!! Zelos is hawt, so yeah... =3 I'd love to see a Kratos/Zelos, or a Yggdrasill/Zelos... I don't care which one, as long as it has Zelos in it ;)
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! And from Zelos' POV it was really funny.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was great. Very sexy and funny, I just love Zelos' thought on everything. Good job, a second chapter would be great! ^^
~Citrus
~Citrus
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dies of Laughter.
Loved the ending! Anyway, keep up the good work ^_^
Loved the ending! Anyway, keep up the good work ^_^