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for Providence

by ErieDragon

person john the heavy
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i seriously hope this can end happy as there current relationship almost seems...........cute^^i love the way you've written this and hope you can keep the level of "awesomeness" up!:)
person WinterWolf
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great, Loving it! the only thing I would have done different is would have had them learn troll and elvish as opposed to orc and common.
person john the heavy
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh smash that language barrier baby!^^
person john the heavy
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh and that picture was awesome by the way the drawer must be extremely talented and the site's definetly bookmarked.
person kiwifluff
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THERE! I was so about to die by the fifth chapter, but six made the wait aaall worth while >:3 oooh don't you worry. I give you pretties later yupyup! >:3 UUHUHUhuhu!
person Thorrbo
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the sex scene, very nice.

Good work, nice build up and execution.

But hey, maybe you're going to continue? :P
person Azure
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, can't wait to read the next part.
person Church
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT I LUVZ IT NICE KEEP IT UP
person john the heavy
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that elf's not very nice but hey what else should you expect from alliance scum^^Very good chapter and im glad that you are managing to update every now and then so update soon please!:)
person kiwifluff
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the reeks of brilliance and an exstensive knowledge of grammar... I loved it ;3; please continue if you can!