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for Joined at the Mind

by solangel

person Silver Wolf
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah... Interesting, heh heh. More to come?
person LDK
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh that was a nice welcome home present *grin* another great chappie...mmmm...glad you finally updated.
person Ri
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I love the concept of this. it's very good. I'm interested to see where this one is going. Keep writing!
person Celesta
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for all your lovely reviews. Im currently thinking of a good 'subject' for the next chapter. if you have requests where they should go at it next tell me. =)
person Mandi Cottontail
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue?
person Toni
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel you must update this or I will have to hold your family for ransom... Yep. Good job indeed.
person Seeker
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! You should definately continue writing this type of story! Cuz I most assuredly enjoyed it and would like to read more of your work so don't give up even though you may not have gotten alot of reviews so far but just keep in mind alot of people are lazy or don't know what to say in a review so that just don't though they continue to read!

I really liked it if thats any consolation. I hope to see more stories from you though! ^o^

~Seeker
person VergilSparda666
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK.....phew! *fans self* Wow that was pretty hot.....nothing like two hot guys going at it!!!!! Thanks for the great read! Write more of this! Sounds like it could have a cool plot 2! *but dont forget more smut!! ROFL
person Nicolas
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I'm still surprised how girls can write so well about men having sex. Amazing. I'm still a tad wondering why girls are so crazy about yaoi though. But nice work!


P.S. Vergil takes a 'e' not a 'i'. At least, in the booklet of the game. Take care!

Nicolas.
person Dante
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a cool idea! very creative, and it has SO much hilarious potential. I hope you keep going!!