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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Why not add more?But try to make it more descritpive....and add other things like difference races and more explicit, hardcore
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinda cardboard on the setup & introduction of characters. I'm not getting a rich feel of life for the scene or people, though there is a nice bit on action. Certain plot bits fall by the wayside too or seem somewhat ignored. *shrug* then again you take what you want from it.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its great, please write some more.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Keep it up, I want to see more!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont let it die! cant wait for you to update, do it soon there isn't enough WoW fanfiction.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
e_e that was actually quite... stimulating. hehehehe!! nicely written!! I don't normally touch these kinds of stories but I'm glad that curiosity got the better of me. you have a nice grip on detail and when to use it! XD keep it up if it tickles your fancy!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! There are some nit-pickey issues with grammar and spelling that distracted me in the beginning, and the erotic scene was a little short, but your descriptions are wonderful. *takes notes*
Thanks for posting this!
Thanks for posting this!