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for Under The Falls

by RydiaMajere

schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering what Lady would do if he got her pregnant from that tryst. I'm guessing she'd try to beat the crap out of Dante.
person joshua
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story please continue it please its a really good story i think this is the best fanfic story ever but thats just my opinion bye bye
person Vampire Olivia
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was good. I like the part where he was undressing in front of her. She just end up staring at him. Sounds like something I would've done.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
person PoutyKitten
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I enjoy that one alot. You made my day much brighter reading this Dante x Lady fic. I read it twice. MEOW! I'm so kitty bad right now, but I promise to be good. NOT! I would love to read more of your stories. Hope you update soon. LoL. ^_^ purrrr...can't wait to read more, purrrlezz.
person PoutyKitten
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meeeooow. This was great reading, even though I read your fic twice. Hope you update soon and write more of Dante x Lady or others. You were really good and I enjoyed this one alot. Keep up the great work, 'kay. LoL. ^_~ purr.
person anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah you need to work on spelling and slight grammar errors then you'll have a good piece. Try and find yourself a good beta if you cant do proofread well yourself.
person Kireiko
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a fine job! Aside from a few spelling and grammar errors, you did a good job, kudos to you! Nicely written, good pace and good style of the story. Poor Lady, knocked out cold.... wonder what kind of dreams she'd have after that ne? *wink*

Keep up the good work.

~Kir
person hmaster
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good work. you did well :)
person Jade Tokier
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just get a beta to clean up things here and there but other than that...not too shabby hun! ^^