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for Drowning Lessons

by RavynMasaki

person a reviewer
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was nice, it wasn't as the others, those can get boring but you kept my interest! I had to read it all when I saw it! Usually, I just save it and read it at home then review later but this was good! x3 continue!
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So said...... Nice story!
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sad!
person Hey Pretty
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The way you made Riku so desperate and how you portrayed the Shadow Sora as something with emotions was fantastic; I havn't see a story like this one yet. I give you a five.

I hope to see more stories from you.
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short, but very good. You have talent. I like the fact that you put Riku and Anit-Sora together. Very different coupeling, but it seems to work very nicely. Will this story but a one-shot, or will you have more chapters?
person Raphael Argai Thanatos
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really hot and beautiful - a VERY rare combination, mind u ^^
maybe u should continue this... 1-shot id not enough, that's my opinion at any rate... this story just seems like.. too good a "prologue", per say. :)
person Rai
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good! I love it! yay for an Antisora lemon!
person Dory
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story. It has a kind of kink to it. Hope to hear more from you soon!

LOVE,
Donna