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for Fate and Fear MST

by Birdie

person Confused fan
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for clearning that up for me. I am not used to MST stuff too,but this is making fun of the girls fanfic and dont you think thats mean? I did go there and thought it was very funny,because it is so mary sue. ^^;
person Xeora
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*twitches* Ugh... Fate and Fear is possitively ATROCIOUS. Yuck. MY grammar isn't even that bad... say, every time we have a freaky romance seen can you have hawt Sparda Twin man smex at the end of the chap to stop my eyes from bleeding? :3 That is, if Dante and Virgil aren't too busy being sick. Lol XD

AWESOME third chapter luv. Continue please!

*shudders* Gawd, do I HATE Mary-Sues....

teh XEORA

(feel free to e-mail meh X3)
person Cidsa
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hhaha oh man. I have to disagree with that confused person, it makes perfect sense and *is* funny..Maybe I'm just easily amused or something, but that kicked ass.
I cry for humanity to know that this type of crappy fic exists, really..it's just...heartbreaking XD

You must continue, this is great stuff :D
I'm even inspired to do my own MST someday.

Also, from this quote:
Vergil: she's been in hand-to-hand combat with the Tekken boys, got eaten from Pacman and became Super Mario's bitch for a week.
I'm inspired to write the most retarded fanfic even created, about someone who gets sucked into games and this kind of thing happens. OMG YES. XD
person TNTN
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A second chapter! Keep up the good work Birdie...
person Celesta
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!! *cracks up laughing for 5 minutes then wipes tear away* i passed this onto my best friend. she usually doesnt read dmc let alone dmc on aff.net and we both couldnt stop laughing! this is friggen hilarious. I especially liked the lines:
Sparda twins: *sings* I believe I can fly......
Christianna: *SPLAT*
Dante: ...... guess she can't.

You have to do more! keep up the good work! *thumbs up*
person Jade Tokier
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*does Wizard of Oz music* Oh hun! I didn't mean "Not offended" in that way LOL. Although I understand why you thought that. Oh geez I hope I didnt sound like the wicked bitch of the west when it came to our stories. That is NOT what I meant lol...You said I hope you're not offended and I said I'm not. That is all I meant...I do love this story. It is very funny! ^_^
person Silver Wolf
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucken crap! This was fucken funny even though probably a quarter of the time I didn't know what was happening. But that was in the first chapter I guess. Dante and Vergil's actions in this story reminds me of my friend and I roleplaying random Devil May Cry, lol!! Keep writing ::holds stomach which is hurting from laughing:: Guh, now I'm going to go read over the 101 pages of roleplaying my friend and I did, I'm not kidding, we roleplayed a plotted DMC roleplay that's 101 pages long. ANYWAY enough about my roleplay, WRITE MORE! INSANITY IS DA BEST DUUUDE!! Well, once in a while of course. Can't live without your daily dose of insanity now, can ya?
person Xeora
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs her ass off* AWESOME!!! X3 Great job on the MST, dearie, haven't read one of these in ages! Mary Sues scare the shit outta me, glad ya did this. :3

Update soon, ne? Oh, btw, is this an ACTUAL fic? Fate and Fear, I mean? XP
person Siarra
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So... More reviews gives us more chapters? Ok, I'm game. There simply aren't enough MSTs around and this one is definitely killing me with laughter. I love the way you're shamelessly picking that horrible fic apart, and some of the comments are downright hilarious in their randomness. Also the way the twins are coming up with new, gruesome deaths for our little Mary S... -erm, forgive me, Christianna is positively delightful. Not to mention that Dante and Vergil are absolutely charming.
I hope you update soon!
person cas (2 lazi 2 log)
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_________________O LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I really hope you continue! Cuz this was hilarious! Specially that "When I pass gas I make strange noises" or sumpthin. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL Luved it! *thumbz-up* And that 10 minute break part with Vergil and Dante. LOL Wow. 14 and lookin lika ho! Sorry! Anyway, plz continue! This is so funny!