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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh. I read this fic on Playstation2Pro.com, and I am so very glad to see a good MST of it. Kudos for writing it! Through all five chapters I was trying not to laugh out loud since my comp is in the living room and everybody else was watching a movie, and my dad kept shooting me weird looks because I was shaking the desk chair trying to hold my laughter in! And I was very happy to see Sparda appear. I agree; I'd rather be with him than any other DMC character. I hope you keep him for the rest of the MST. Keep writing; I'm loving this!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, let's not ban ALL the kids, just the ones who write crap like this....which is a large, LARGE portion of them I bet (glances over to FF.net and then quickly tears out eyes).
Annnyways, great chapter (4), I'll have to do another review for 5..just because I do.
You had a few mispellings and wrong words (Like Dante says "Reflects" instead of "Reflexes")..it just makes it seem like you making fun of her spelling mistakes is unfair because you screwed up too..or something XD
Also, I don't get why this girl thinks making herself into a total skanky, lame, goth chick is cool. I suppose this is why that Hot Topic store is so popular, even though it sucks. Oh kids, you are so dumb. :P
Annnyways, great chapter (4), I'll have to do another review for 5..just because I do.
You had a few mispellings and wrong words (Like Dante says "Reflects" instead of "Reflexes")..it just makes it seem like you making fun of her spelling mistakes is unfair because you screwed up too..or something XD
Also, I don't get why this girl thinks making herself into a total skanky, lame, goth chick is cool. I suppose this is why that Hot Topic store is so popular, even though it sucks. Oh kids, you are so dumb. :P
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00t!
This MST is great, what would I do without my daily dose of crazyness? WHAT WOULD I DO??
Sparda was pretty awesome, he should definetly come back :D
Also, is it wrong for me to have wanted a little 3-some action going on? Goddamn I'm a total pervert XD
This MST is great, what would I do without my daily dose of crazyness? WHAT WOULD I DO??
Sparda was pretty awesome, he should definetly come back :D
Also, is it wrong for me to have wanted a little 3-some action going on? Goddamn I'm a total pervert XD
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop here!! We need more Dante/Vergil YAOI!
Don't you like Vergil uke? He's always seme, what about a change?
And for Sparda I really liked him in this fic!!! Write moooooooooooooooore!!
Don't you like Vergil uke? He's always seme, what about a change?
And for Sparda I really liked him in this fic!!! Write moooooooooooooooore!!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy this chapter too and whacko_dante loves this story LOL. He told me so! He is the one who got me into reading it.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAH THE PAAAIN!! ::blood wounds open up on silver fur each time Wolf feels sick::O__O oogh, I think I'll join you with the bucket ordeal Verge. ::runs to bathroom, noises of retching::
::returns:: Ugh, from what I've seen so far I'd guessed this author was like 14. Dang, we just get more and more young whores nowadays neh? ::sighs and goes on ranting about all the whores and sluts from her own Middle School:: Ah well, I'm not in Middle School anymore and they could all go to hell. Christianna needs to get a life or something.
From my past experience, I've known never to pair a story's popular character up with an OC because readers get pissed off. Not unless your character is created that well. Well I know that I won't be writing any Mary Sues because I'm too obsessed with Dante & Yaoi.
The boys were funny in this one.
Wolf: ::gives Dante a puppy-kiss on the cheek, gives Vergil a bottle of vintage wine::
Vergil: Ooh, nice stuff.
Dante: Hey, what about me?!
Wolf: .... ::gives Dante a bottle of beer::
Dante: YAAAY! ::sits next to Vergil, gnaws the cap off and proceeds to down drink::
Wolf: O__O What the hell is wrong with Dante, he's acting like.. Well, he's acting weird.
Vergil: ::pats Wolf and leaves a saucer of the wine on the ground for her:: Didn't you hear from Birdie?
Wolf: Oh right, Christianna exposure. Someone save my poor mind!! ::proceeds to try and get drunk with saucer of wine so she can forget it all::
::returns:: Ugh, from what I've seen so far I'd guessed this author was like 14. Dang, we just get more and more young whores nowadays neh? ::sighs and goes on ranting about all the whores and sluts from her own Middle School:: Ah well, I'm not in Middle School anymore and they could all go to hell. Christianna needs to get a life or something.
From my past experience, I've known never to pair a story's popular character up with an OC because readers get pissed off. Not unless your character is created that well. Well I know that I won't be writing any Mary Sues because I'm too obsessed with Dante & Yaoi.
The boys were funny in this one.
Wolf: ::gives Dante a puppy-kiss on the cheek, gives Vergil a bottle of vintage wine::
Vergil: Ooh, nice stuff.
Dante: Hey, what about me?!
Wolf: .... ::gives Dante a bottle of beer::
Dante: YAAAY! ::sits next to Vergil, gnaws the cap off and proceeds to down drink::
Wolf: O__O What the hell is wrong with Dante, he's acting like.. Well, he's acting weird.
Vergil: ::pats Wolf and leaves a saucer of the wine on the ground for her:: Didn't you hear from Birdie?
Wolf: Oh right, Christianna exposure. Someone save my poor mind!! ::proceeds to try and get drunk with saucer of wine so she can forget it all::
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea whacko_dante does rule. But hey good chapter...
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears away* I nearly choked I was laughing so hard. I've already sent it to my friends. Keep this up! It fucking hilarious! I'm actualyl almost tempted to feel sorry for whoever wrote this... because it's just.... WOW.... BAAD. Also, incest = good, phedophiles = bad. *starts the 'don't make Dante seem like a phedophile' petition*
I'm looking forward to the next part of this!
I'm looking forward to the next part of this!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes let's start from the beginning...I do love this story. Mighty funny and I am glad you updated. ^_^
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00t another great chapter :D
What scares me the most about this fic is the description the site it's located on gives: Description: DMC fanfic with romance, action, and other good stuff. Mature Content.
"Good Stuff"??? I really hope the owner of that site is just trying to be nice or something.
Also, shite like this makes me want to ban kids from the internet XD
No internet for you! Mwahahaha
What scares me the most about this fic is the description the site it's located on gives: Description: DMC fanfic with romance, action, and other good stuff. Mature Content.
"Good Stuff"??? I really hope the owner of that site is just trying to be nice or something.
Also, shite like this makes me want to ban kids from the internet XD
No internet for you! Mwahahaha