rate_review Reviews

I loved the fic, but what happened at the end pleaese e-mail me and tell me and Yes I think you should do a cont. story on this one.

Oh yeah a Black Sun that sound like somthing Luther would do...or maybe someone else is doing but why would that person be after Fayt maybe it's his powers? now all they need is Strange new monsters what is Cliff up to?, and what is going to happen to Fayt well they find out him past out or they find out that he can fight that would be something new but good luck with this one.

I loved it! I would love to see more if you wanted to keep up with this fanfic because I have never got to read something like this. I loved the fact that Fayt was a slave and Albel got him like that, but the best part was at the end. I feel sorry for Fayt because I would think having wings growing out of your back would hurt. If I had to rate this then I would rate it 12 out of 10 so far. ^.^

I like it.
Oh my poor Fayt...he not going to die is he?...I hope he use his Angel wings things...from his power to save him safe...maybe Some hope well tell him to use his powers now who made him fall that wasn't Luther voice was it? dose he want Fayt also? that if he's in it. what well Albel do?, I kind of wish they left Vox out side and sleep in that would of been funny but please do keep up the good work.

tbc...?