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for Feels Like I'm Dying

by Parasomnia

person Meg
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I was confused at first whether Cynthia thought she was fucking Henry or if she knew she was fucking Walter all along. But I enjoyed it and Cynthia dosen't deserve the spotlight as she should...lol!

Great story! WRITE MORE!
person Aileen
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was really amazing...and I do agree with you about respecting Walter, et al. Still, as you said, fanfiction is...well, fanfiction.

Really, it's amoung the hottest SH fics I've ever read...necrophilia; virgin!Walter; blood; slimy things. Fortunately, I love all of that. I'll definitely keep reading if you keep writing.
person Queen Moon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome!!! i havent read something that detailed/good in awhile. 2 thumbs up!
person Gaia Faye
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with a previous poster; it was weird. Only 'cause they were dead and all. It actually made a hell of a lot of sense, though. Cynthia's behavior (in Chapter Two) reminds me of Dawn of the Dead, when they all go to the mall 'cause that's what they were used to doing in life. XD

Btw, you wrote Silent Hill: The Roommates? If that's the story I think it is, I remember really liking it. lol Oblivious Walter is so much fun.
person Doctor_Nightfall
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

That, my friend, was GOOD. VERY good indeed.

I hope to see more from you in future...
person Crystal
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is WOW. I really loved that last chapter. And I was even mentioned in the author's notes! Woo!! But back on topic... I can't say anything bad about it because there wasn't anything that could be improved on, in my opinion. Excellent. I truly hope you will write more.
person Banditking64
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. ^_^ I liked every part of it. *Giggles*
person this
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was weird
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"this was weird"? Well, good, I was hoping that it would be different.
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grin* I'd be in the market for it, always up for something new. Great descriptions; I love the slightly-paranoid Cynthia. The way you described the atmosphere instantly made want to go pop in the game (I missed it a bit and am just now realizing it...) and see if just somehow, I could find a cheat that'd translate the events you've written so exquisitely into SH graphics. ^_^

Hooray for Cynthia's beautiful demise at the hands of a wonderfully sadistic author!

~Kit