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Riku is gay now huh? I think that he should be bi cause he still kinda likes girls right? I think that yaoi fan girl is really strange... She kinda annoys me. And the witchcraft thing... I was like "... ok.." Sometimes she should back off but she wouldn't be a rabid fangirl if she did. So far the story is really good. I'm excited to see what they do and what his former friends will do about it. Is Hikari going to come and try to kill them both?! That would be insane if she did.

Riku is gay! la la la la! It is a tough thing to accept ya know... I mean... It would kinda like change your whole outlook on life.

Great chapter! You worked things out between the characters well.

Hi! I really like your story so far, as I am slowly working my way through it. I know you said it was unbeta-ed, but the Grammer mistakes seem to be small and far apart. Just one little thing really caught my eye....in chappy six when you say...“Yea, let’s do that! How about we meet at my house?” Kairi began to come up with suggestions of what SNAKES everyone should bring when Riku suddenly stopped. “What’s wrong?” Riku shook his head and pointed.
Now, I'm guessing that's supposed to be SNACKS. It's just since the two are so...different (Hehe) It really stood out. Just thought you should know. Okay, I'm going back to your story now. Keep up the good work.

yay Sora and Riku made up! Shame they didn't make out though... heh there's always next chapter!

I love this fic but I seriously want to kick Sora's mom's ass around hte island a million times. kairi I want to bash her head into the cave's walls repeatedly, then dunk her head under pure sea salty water, then do it over and over but not kill her. No no no I wnat her to suffer. Tidus and Wakka... I jsut wanna hit them until my arms fall off. And I still wanna see Sora with leon but you know this is your fic so go wiht it *weak smile*

next next pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase T.T tell me when it's done

OMG! PleasePleasePleasePleasePlease Update Soon!! I NEED To Know What Happens Next!! Sora and Riku NEED to get together like NOW and straighten out this mess that damned bitch made! God I hate Kairi! *rants about her* PLEASE try to update soon! I will shower you with praise forever!!! XD -Zero Saotome-

I really love this story. Seriously... I stopped reading it for a while cause there weren't any updates for a while. Then when I was lookin for stories, I found this one again. Its kinda angsty but I still like it. Hope you update soon. I know college is tough, especially if you have work on top of it. D: Get to the story when you can, but don't let your grades suffer because of it!

PS: Um... hopefully this isnt too much to ask... but could you send me an email when you update? Thanks!

PLEAZE UPDATE.

Hurry your arse up! I want the next chapter soon!