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So thats why that girl does witchcraft. I've never played the gameboy version of Kindom Hearts and I just realized the Blackjack reference. Kinda sad seeings I'm playing the game. ^^' This chapter is dripping with angst. But its acceptible cause there is reason for it. I think the dad is kinda abusive. D: You should smack you're kid like that! One or two maybe but jeeze, it was like a smack fest with him. Is the dad really homophobic? I can't tell. Cause if that were to happen to me, I would be too mad about him being an ass to Kairi to say anything about the book. Personally though it wouldn't be the book I cared about either. I would more care about why he had it. Example: I bought a manga that was really good. And later found so gay themes to it (it was before I was into yoai) I didn't care but it kinda surprised me. And made me hope my dad never found it.

Thanks for the email. I was really helpful!

Aw. That was a nice little change. Ansem a good guy? I like it. Until I find out he's gonna turn out evil anyway. >>; Then I'll be sad. D: And everyone needs to smart up and realize that Kairi is just a lying little bitch who needs a good slap in the face or more. This is killing me how they think Kairi is all innocent and Sora is a cheating bastard; IT'S THE OTHER WAY AROUND, PEOPLE! *smacks them all* And one might say it was Sora's fault that happened, but I think that Kairi would have flipped out and attacked him anyway because Riku would have STILL fallen in love with him. Buuut, long enough review, I'm gonan go now. Great story, update soon! :D

Hmm, good, good. I really want to see what happens when Leon and Co. read the letter. I kind of picture them rushing out to make sure he's okay. I know why you skipped the trial scenes, and for the most part that's cool, but I think you shouldn't avoid it when it comes to Sora's testimony. Just to give us a feel of how it goes over with the jury and such. Kairi, I could really care less about but I'm curious about Sora's testimony. Also I wonder if Ansem will call on any witnesses to help Sora's side of the story. Maybe Selphie who Kairi misled or RIku who came upon them. Maybe Leon and them will even drop in for the final day of the trial. Ahh, I wanna know they're reactions to Sora's letter so bad. xD

ooooh i loved this chapter to, cant wait till the shopping bit. why did riku invite that girl (whos name i've forgoten)?

Gosh....can't wait for that birthday... >w< I really hope things get better... Please, please not betrayal from selphie -.o

omg, i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo loving this story so far, i just read 27 chapters with out getting bored once. i cant wait for more, update soon please

a couple of things:

1) very well written althought I could do without all the flashbacks
2) Will Sora and Riku get togehter in the end?
3) if Kairi gets away with this I'm sending you a curse by way of evil dust bunnies!!!

ok that's it i want kairi to die soooooooooooooooooooooo badly omg i hope she get's what's coming to her soon i was screaming at my computer for like an hour i'm still pissed at her ok well anywho this is a great story please continue !

AWESOME STORY! I love the idea of Sora being a cross-dresser, never even thought of it, actually. Hope you update soon!

Come on! When is Kairi going to get busted! And she should get a serious dose of humiliation too. What is up with all the people who sided with her? Don't they know the wound was on the back of his skull and that she has no wounds at all AND that the blood on her was Sora's? If there's a trial or something then shes got nothing to back her up. ;)