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o-k so I totally didn't get that...
was it happening then or was it like a flashback/dream?
it was good... just confusing

This is turning out to be a very interesting story. I hope Riku finds out about Sora soon. I really want to see them get together!! Update soon! ^.~

good good
continue!

Nice fanfic and nice plot idea. I guess Sora could get off being found out by simply saying "I never _said_ I was a girl" eventhough he never denied it. I mean, everyone assumed he was a girl, it's not his fault. Although he's playing a hard game, he should think about Riku's feelings.
Players will never prosper. Death to Touya!!

I did notice some grammar mistakes, the usual "where/were" "quiet/quite" among those, it doesn't really kill the story but it's always good to keep an eye on those words.

The chapter Riku will know Sora's true gender is really gnawing at me. And ever chapter that will follow before this fateful chapter will be like twisting a knife in my heart. Now, knowing this you know you can't drag things eternally. Have pity on a fan.

Keep up the writing and write fast. (no pressure? hah!)

Jou-pup

Ohh goooood its getting better and better. I'll wait for the next update. Thanks for mailing me.

ah--bliss---You updated, not once but twice! I hope to see more Riku and Sora action. Did I mention I loath Riku's phycotic wannabe girlfriend. Damn she needs to get hit by a bus and leave the boys to play! Well, I hope you update when every you get sometime. I know how hard it is to keep them coming. Thank you for sending me an e-mail informing me that you updated. Please send another when you update again.

wishing you the best of luck,

rAiNwAtEr

Wow this story is addicting (did I spell that right?) I can't wait for more your a great writer.
-see ya
^-^
*blows kisses to everyone*

I really like this story. When I was reading it, it reminded me of when a guy on Metal Gear Soild 2 grabbed Raiden's crotch to see if he was a guy. XD
At first I was like, WTF!?! Then I laughed my ass off cause he does look so much like a girl. Anyway, I like that Sora can actually pull the girl thing off.
I would think they would recognize his voice being male, unless he makes himself sound like a girl or naturally sounds like that. One thing that I don't like, your chapters are so short! T_T
Hope you update soon. I know college is tough, so good luck!

Damn it! I wish upon wishes that Riku and the others would find out that Sora's a FRIKKEN GUY!! O<;; ...SOON! I hate it when they refer to Sora as a girl; it's driving me nuts! *rips hair out* But other than that, I like your story! Well written and minimal errors and typos! :3 Good work!

college is hell. for me anyways and i'm going back! well jsut update when u can ^^ and i gotta say this, kairi and slephie, what bitches!! yeah so sroa is a better girl than either of them. deal! and sora, oh geez this is not gonna end well but seriously kairi, i jsut wanna beat hte crud outta her wihta baseball bat (i've been wathcin paranoid agent a little too much) but i love ur story! gotta go laterz!!