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@_@ BETTER AND BETTER...please go on XD. Don't forget to tell me when its the next. I'm Impacient

I love this story. Everyone's so childish. And Riku getting on Sora's nerves, it'd be interesting to see if theybecome the best of friends or more. Ah, suspense..

This story gets me riled up, congrats. I'm guessing we don't like Kairi, or we just don't care about her feelings? Funny how typical she's acting for a teen girl. Riku was surprising, though. If he suspected Sora was a boy, would he've gotten that close?

I'm crazy about this story. It's fics like these that make me go crazy and want to shout out that I'm a RikuSora fan, and have adamant Kingdom Hearts players pelt me with rocks for mentioning it. What a low person I am, when I haven't personally even played the game. I really hope there's more soon. I go and form my campaign for a new chapter now...

OMG! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sora and Riku finally kissed on the lips!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ---------------melts to the floor in pure ecstasy--------- Oh I loved this chapter. I am glad some one knows about Sora being a boy. I have to say I don't really like Selphie. She is acting just like Kairi. I like the way you portray her though. It all adds some nice drama. I have two really favorite lines in this chapter. The first being when Riku says: "Don't stick out your tongue if you don't intend to use it." I heard that from some where. It fits with Riku. I could picture him saying something just like that. The other line I liked was When Riku says he can't wait to steal Riku from Leon. I was like, "You go boy! You get you some ass!" LOL I don't mind if you only update one chapter at a time. If anything that would mean more updates! ---screams in joy------------ I love this story and hope to read the next chapter soon. Thank you for telling me that you had updated. The e-mails really help.

WOW!!!!!! I just luv your story!! I hope you update soon cuz I've read all 18 chapters and would really like to read some more. (yeah I have nothing better to do. sad isn't it.) anyway I just wanted you to know how great and talented an auther i think you are. I just luv the girly Sora. hehe. Hope you update soon!!!

I just finished reading Chapter 4, and I have to say that the way you wrote it makes it seem like there's no hope for Leon and Sora to be together...Meaning Riku can just come right in and take Sweet Sora-dear's precious heart. :\ Which is what I prefer anyway. But anyway, this was all very well written! Especially the dream scene. I feel that the confusion in the beginning helped shape the chapter and (hopefully) the story.

Great so far! :)

I'm only up 'till chapter six right now, and I'll finish reading some other time, but I really really really hope this finishes off as a Riku/Sora! :'( They don't get enough WELL-WRITTEN luff. Which, by the way, yours is wonderfully written!! XDXD Riku/Sora for ever!

Awesome! I lied the fighting seen. Riku's seems wicked hot! I can't wait for Riku and Sora to get close. ---sigh--I'm hooked on this story. I hope you find the time to update soon. I am happy that you decided to start writring longer chapters. I hate Kiari. If I were to look the word BITCH up in the dictionary her picture would be beside the deffinition. I really don't like her.

Looking forward to more,

rAiNwAtEr

owo kewl, so that's the explanation between sora's chain X3 quite cool...I'm hoping more Riku&Sora action ^^. I'll be waiting for the next mail