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in all honestly... i feel sorry for no one. Riku is a pig-headed fool who should take a hint that 'new girl' doesn't like him and maybe tell kairi that she isn't girlfriend material. strike one. if i were sora and ir eally loved leon i would have found a way to hide from mom and stayed in traverse town by any and every means possible. he's jsut mooping and acting lieka baby. strike two. kairi is a bitch who thinks riku loves her. yes as a sister but that girl is jsut plain obssessed and now striking sora? if i were sora i would so have her skany ass in jail for attacking me jsut becasue she's threwing a hissy fit. strike three. i feel no pity for any of them whatsoever. they are all idiots and if iw ere there i'd bitch slap the guys and i'm smash a brick in the bitch's head until my arms fell off. good fic but gah, i rather see sora and leon get together. u don't see muhc of that pairing happening.

Goodness, I just realized how n00b-ish I sounded in my earlier review. Well, I've calmed down and read through the chapters again so now I can form a coherent review. xP This is an excellent story. I really like how although Sora dresses and acts like a girl at times, he isn't really a girl. It's surprising how many gender-bender fics you can find. >.>; No matter. I think it's great that Riku finally decided that he likes Sora even if he is a boy. This is really well written too. =D No terrible grammer or spelling mistakes, and no stupid mistakes either. I can't believe Kairi actually started attacking Sora with a rock though.. But I suppose Sora had it coming. *shakes head* You shoulda listened to your mother's advice, Sora. I'm not sure who I feel bad for.. all of them I guess... well, mainly Kairi and Sora though. xP

And.. that's it for now. Please update soon. ;_;

Omg, omg, omg! How could you stop it there??? *twitchspaz* More! >.< I love this story! Update soon.. pleeeaaassee!

i HATE kairi! She's anm evil bitch and must die! update!

I feel sorry for Sora. The poor thing. Methinks Leon should pop over and take Sora back with him. Leaving Riku behind with conniving Kairi.. lol but its your story. Its very good by the way..

Dude..I gotta say..THIS STORY KICKS MAJOR ASS! There's no other words I can express to show you how much this story rocks! And I am not joking! ^^ The person i feel sorry for is Riku, tops, then Kairi, then Sora. Riku the most because he has to deal with Kairi's infatuation with him, he loves Sora but he doesn't really know Sora's a guy yet. Riku just has a lot more shit going on.

Kairi the second because she loves Riku, but RIku does not love her (not like that anyhow). Though..I do feel like she's trying to force Riku to love her sometimes and she should really move on, she can't really help wha she feels. I feels for her man.

Sora the last cause he's just suffering from home-sickness. He pretends to be a girl and he hurts the people around him and he doesn't even know how much he is inflicting on Riku and Kairi! Whoa..this is like the first time I sided with Kairi -_-. I hope Sora moves on and looks for someone else cause there's someone there that loves him just as much as Leon..even more.

Okay this is the longest opinion-review I 've ever written ><. I seriously can't wait to read your next update. Great job.

Holy crap, Kairi is ballistic. Poor obsessed girl. Crazy girls like that are scary. I also feel sorry for Sora... wasn't sure if I liked him or not. I guess I like him now that he pretty much told his plans to Kairi and hurt her. Cute nefarious Sora. How can they both fight over Riku, the has nothing but great looks guy. Whipped, being pushed around by girls.

Urgh, every chapter I read where Sora's gender is not found out is like a stake in my heart. Just a _lot_ more annoying. So, from what I gathered Kari will either
A) Really damage Sora
B) Kill Sora

And I'm a little ashamed to say that while hitting him with a rock was pretty mean, disgusting and not safe, Sora kinda had it coming. You just don't push someone's button like that and turn your back to them. Specially in a secret cave-like place where the chances of someone finding your body is scarce. Can you say "Murder scene"?
On a sidenote, with Sora down (or fainted from what I understood) Kairi, even has bitchy as portraited, can't just leave Sora there. If anyone knows she assaulted him/her she'll be in deep shit (so to speak). So she'll have to move him/her in order to either get help or hide the body. Hopefully, she'll notice that he's a guy... then again, do we really want _Kairi_ to know Sora's true gender?

Who do I pity the most? Everyone. Kairi's attempts to break Sora and Riku up are quite pitiful. Sora's plan to get back to traverse town really makes me shake my head. (I mean his mom can decide to move him to some other place, _then_ what will he do?) And Riku's obliviousness kinda makes me sad...well more mad than sad but yea, I just can't imagine how he'll react when the cat is out of the bag.

This story really gives me mixed feelings. It's the first time I read something where I'm not rooting for anyone and when sometimes I just think Sora, Riku and Kairi are really acting like fools; can't we all be friends? XD
It's a compliment by the way, I only get this feeling while reading mangas like Hana yori dango or Hot Gimmick...

ANYWAYS, that was a way too long review so to cut it short, I say : Nice twist. Is Sora dead? OMGWTFBBQ!!!!! Write more please! I'll be waiting for any new chapters.

I feel sorry for Riku. Riku is cute and nice and all and Sora is such an ass for him. But then again, they are cute together, love ´em.

... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
*runs in small circles panicking* you evil evil eprson how can you leave it hagning there! I swear i will slaughter the person who came up with cliff hangers! i love this fic you gotta keep writing! need more chapter...*falls over*