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for Strawberry Wine

by Niffty24

person Cidsa
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! :D
The ending was so sad! I guess you got the part in the story where Zelos dies huh? (There is a way to prevent this actually..XD)
One thing you should add is some kind of divider on the lines that are from the song, it's a little confusing at first!
person Xeora
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_____________; WAH! The ending was sad!!! But I loved this!!! 4/5 luv!!! :D