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for Good Girls Don't Swallow

by tempest

schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Good. It gives a far more human element to Candice. We need more Candy Suxxx Work.
person Aslan669
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, the guy above me obviously needs help, probably some middle age loser who jerks off to incest kiddy porn. I liked it, nice writing, and I like that you went in the mental state and history of one of the more colorful characters from the game. Check out my own GTA fanfic, its the first one in this category, called GTA Connections. Maybe we could work on one together, you're a pretty good writer. Later!
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey shithead u should fuckoff and theso pornostar and shithead should die and i want stan u and beat u and shoot u with gun for not make this nc-17
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. A nice tribute to one of the cameo characters of GTA. I like it.
person rayne
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

i LOve this one!! you HAVE to keep on writing it!!