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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story and honestly, I couldn't get enough of it .
Good job and keep it up :D .
Good job and keep it up :D .
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, you wrote EXACTLY what I want. Dante as himself with Vergil. And I am Silver Wolf, I just didn't know that you left a message at the end of Chapter 2. Write more Yaoi!!!!!!!!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! I loved this last bit. For your first time writing yaoi, you did absolutely wonderful. I saw once common, little mistake. Just a bit of future reference and CC, next time instead of saying "....which caused him to cry out", dont say 'which caused'. Modify it to be "And it made him cry out" or "and he cried out". the word 'caused' makes it sound too technical! but other than that, great fic! very funny, too.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOU MADE A YAOI VERSION!!! WHOOO! I don't care if it sucked or not but I'm a desperate DMC Yaoi fan, XD. As for reference in M/M coupling.. I'm pretty surey you can just read through the yaoi fics in this section, there seems to be quite the number.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok....let me catch my breath.........................Ok there....WOW! That was SO hot!! I'm glad that I was the only one in the room when I read that! Way to go! Please write more DxV stuff!! Nice Job!!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Vergil's not fooled at all, eh? XD I love this fic, please continue it! m(_._)m
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUNNY! Especially liked that part where Dante was turned into a girl. But the best, was when Virgil peeked into Dante's room and said those words. WHAT A SHOCK! Could you please make another chappie? Dying to know how Dante would react!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Updates! please. that's just simply delicious. Make a chapter with DanteVerge only this time, in Dantes Body!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Must update.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It flows beautifully. I love it.