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I'm kind of glad that Sophia is not in this one or else she would be mad I do like Sophia only as freinds nothing more nothing less. ah so now what is going to happen who well they run into in the morning or who well come look fore them? and get a suprised to see them like that, or maybe they are alone fore now but I can see someone standing there speechless or shocked that would be kind of funny I think...

/claps/ This fic...Is so GREAT!!!! GREAT I SAY!! This was my first time reading a fic for this pairing and wow! I love this pairing and this fic! I would have to say that this fic is one of the best I read! And I read alot of fics and only two of them are as good as this! Great job on this fic! Please write more!! You have such great writing!! I LOVE YOU!! :D Great job again I hope to read more of your fics!
Love ya!
-HopefulAngel

Most awesome sentences:

"...He always had his eyes on other people, studying them for their faults so that he could feel a little better about his own. Looking to Fayt, he could never find any.

"It was just a hug and Albel, to be honest, always looked like he needed a few."

“'With all of the times I’ve thought about it, I think I should be good,' Albel said with a smirk."

I love how you explained what Albel's REAL reason was for letting Fayt and Co. go at the Kirlsa Training Facility. And then Albel bit Fayt. XD Only one correction: "Un-phased" is actually spelled "unfazed." The whole thong exchange really made me laugh. XD I agree with you on the Albel kissing thing, too. Okay, so! To finish off, I'd just like to say that your characterization is wonderful, as usual, and the flow of things in this story was really smooth and natural.

That was the hottest Fayt/Albel fic I've ever read. Way to go and keep writing!

I like it.
Good work. yeah it make me want to see what the morning well be like win Albel and Fayt wakes up I wonder who well find out they are a couple not unless they are alone. but yeah the fight between who gets to be on top is now beging but you're fic sounds to be a good one so keep up the good work. can't wait fore chap2. to get done and no rush on it so I'll say good luck on this one. but yeah I do like the couples I hope it stay like that so who else are a couple around there beside Albel and Fayt?...

tbc...?

Absolutely lovely, I applaud you! May you create other wonderful stories involving these two sexy boys ^^

Oh... oh my. How could you say it's stupid? And I love the ending. =P I was giggling and squealing the whole time. I've told you before, but I love your writing style. And your Albel. Love, love, love this fic. Hm.. I guess it's never too early in the morning for good smut. XD