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This fanfiction is so perfect~ You've portrayed them very realistically, and everything was just so much well-written and overally pleasant to read...I could read it over and over again and never get tired of it. I praise your writing skills as well as the maturity you let shine through them ^^ I wanted to keep praising you, but I think if I kept on I would end up only blabbering forever in happiness. Keep up the greatness!

Zomg. Very very nice. I like the concept of Albel having his first kiss/make out session/fuck with Fayt aswell. Just seems.....fitting. Like he really wound t waste it on anyone but someone he cared deeply for and trusted, which the only person alive that he feels all that for is, of course, Fayt

I must say that this piece was beautifully written. You came a little close to Albel being OOC, but pulled it off wonderfully regardless. The Lemon was also great, not too fluffy, while keeping to the sexiness that makes one enjoyable. Great job. I hope you write more Star Ocean soon!

This was so great! I've never actually played any of these games, but I saw this pairing somewhere and thought the characters were cute together and wanted to read up on them haha. I must say this is definitely one of the best lemons I've read on here! Not too nasty, and lots of fluff, just the way I like it xD Thanks for taking the time to make a nice long oneshot, instead of rushing through it and having a crap end product lol. Great job on this--please write more sometime ;3

WOW!! That was a great story! I can't tell you how long I've been searching for a fic just like that. *bows to you in praise* You nailed both Albel and Fayt's pesonas so well, and your writing itself is just like....wow. PLEASE write more! If you need a story idea I'll be happy to supply you with one! Just e-mail me! I was gonna write it myself but I'm having too much trouble with Albel and Fayt's reactions to events. T.T I feel that you however, would write it perfectly! Please keep up the posting!
Your fan,
Morality_Of_Sin

I liked it very much, what did say? I LOVED IT!!!!
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! LoL. I hope you write
much more fics like this in the future of Fayt and Albel.
I love the pair AlbelxFayt

-Erim-

I hate how Albel is always calling Fayt an idiot or maggot. Thats not something you say to someone you just had sex with. Plus they are rather unintelligent comebacks. If he's so smart he should say something else.

O_O Wow.Albel being gentle and caring.Now THAT'S a sight to see.I like the title and how you described their relationship.And I thank you for making them say "I love you" to each other.So far ALL and i mean all of the fics I read never had Albel or Fayt saying "I love you" to each other.It was driving me nuts.^_^ Really nice story you got here and a bit funny.Hehe.The other fics I read also had Albel wearing...nothing underneath.Hahaha.I LOVE this story.It's really hot.I hope you write others as hot as this one.Never reviewed these stories before.You gave me the courage to write a review for this kind of fic.^^ Thank you.I'll try and review the rest of your stories.See ya next time!

That was simply amazing. -_____- (that's supposed to be a satisfied face). There's not enough Albie and Fayt smut, and there damn well should be. *loves them* Heheh...you do realise Fayt's vow at the end makes a sequel almost obligatory.....? *clutches onto your leg* Please consider one, oh great Sakura-san! lol.

This was BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Encore, ENCORE!!!! Bravo! Your writing style astounds me! Amazing! I asume this is a common pairing? I'm not sure. I've only read a few Star Ocean fics, so, I'm not smpletely sure. AlbelXFate has now made it onto my top 5 favorite pairings list and is my favorite pairing now...all thanks to this fic! This was extremely well written, hardly a flaw. I think that has to have been one of the best lemons that I've read all summer! Please, keep writing. I have yet to check out your other fics, but, be sure that I'm going to do so. Expect much positive feed back on this. Thank You...And Goodnight!

~Lethal Feathers