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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking good so far - I tend to ignore most of the grammar checks when I do spell-check. Sometimes a sentence fragment is all that goes through a character's head, neh?
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh someone caught Sore and Riku.......pleasssssssssssssss write more I wanna know how this is going to turn out ^^ your really good keep it up.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals like a crazied fan girl* I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I'm absolutely DIEING for the next chapter!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post it soon!!!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU EVIL EVIL WOMAN. LEMON LEMON LEMON NOWWWWW!!! *begs with chibi eyes*
Anywhores, this was a fantastic start for a first time fic. Wonderfully written. I'm waiting for an update woman. Hurry it up! :)
-ecs
Anywhores, this was a fantastic start for a first time fic. Wonderfully written. I'm waiting for an update woman. Hurry it up! :)
-ecs
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your fanfiction, I think it's sooo cute, but and I am trying to be as nice as possible cuz this is ur first fanfic, i dont like the cloths sora was wearing the fishnet thing and those pants, it is just really hard for me to picture it, that's all other than that i like and i hope you write more.