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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful story, very well written! : D And lots of Yuan angst, cause we all love it! This is terrific!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was Amazing =D nice work, please, please write more =D
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hey, I just got an opinion! Kratos is trying to figure out why Yuan was hiding things, right? In this first chapter, Mithos bit his lips, and it bled! Shouldn't that last for a while? Shouldn't Kratos have noticed it?
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And it's good that your chapters are long! Long chapters are good.
I love this... continue. Please. I beg of you...! I mean it! The writing's really good, better than what I can do!
I love this... continue. Please. I beg of you...! I mean it! The writing's really good, better than what I can do!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this story rocks! I love how everyone is in character! (mithos is cause.. hes insane o_O) its really really great! please update soon! and sorry i have no opinons for you, though i was happy to see mah fave bishi zelos in the story ^^
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! ZELOS WAS IN THIS ONE, yeah! *jumps in air and almost breaks legs*
Mithos, that lazy bastard. Yggdrasill, who is the same person, who I like more.
This chapter was really good, and like I stated before, as long as you update,
everything is cool! Poor, poor Yuan!
Please continue, and tell your friend that I say she's a really good writter!
Mithos, that lazy bastard. Yggdrasill, who is the same person, who I like more.
This chapter was really good, and like I stated before, as long as you update,
everything is cool! Poor, poor Yuan!
Please continue, and tell your friend that I say she's a really good writter!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was also a great chapter! Kratos is everyone's nurse, isn't he? Ah well, I think it'd be funny to see him fit that role. ^_^
I just loved Yuan in this chapter. I kept wincing every time he turned around and fell or did anything it seems. Poor guy. =(
I just loved Yuan in this chapter. I kept wincing every time he turned around and fell or did anything it seems. Poor guy. =(
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O Mithos/Yuan rapage! OMG SQUEE! XD I haven't seen one of this since...Since...Well, I HAVEN'T seen one of these before! ^.^ You should definately write more. If you do, I can't wait for it! ...By chance will there be hints of Kratos x Yuan? o_O
If not, oh well. ^.^ If yes, OMG YAY! :9 Nekonin are so ky00te. ^.^ Taste like chicken too...
Good luck, and stay alive dear. o_O
Malicously Yours,
The Exile, Marr
If not, oh well. ^.^ If yes, OMG YAY! :9 Nekonin are so ky00te. ^.^ Taste like chicken too...
Good luck, and stay alive dear. o_O
Malicously Yours,
The Exile, Marr
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* Wow. Ouch, poor Yuan! I can definitely see Mithos being that cruel to him though. (He's everyone's bitch, no? ^^)
The whole time I was reading this, I kept thinking "where the hell is Kratos?!!! Go save him!!" Gah! I hate to see Yuan treated so poorly!
You've definitely got a full 10 out of 10 for the creep factor. Creepy little Mithos definitely steals the cake from the little girl from the Ring. ^^;;;
The whole time I was reading this, I kept thinking "where the hell is Kratos?!!! Go save him!!" Gah! I hate to see Yuan treated so poorly!
You've definitely got a full 10 out of 10 for the creep factor. Creepy little Mithos definitely steals the cake from the little girl from the Ring. ^^;;;