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for My Prize, My Price

by questckat

person Wouldn't you like ta know?
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maid! Maid! I wanna imagine him as a maid! Maaaaid!
i can imagine it...
ENZAN: you missed a spot
NETTO: n-no! i'm sorry! *rubs spot continuously*
ENZAN: too late *pulls Netto over lap*

... such a pervert i am, ne?
darn.

oh well, this was nicely done, though it kinda creeped me out a bit...
the doll thing at the end scared me a lot...
*shudder*
kinda freaky... but in a good way i guess...
well, good luck on your next lemon!
hope ta see it up soooooon!
person Janiella
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story <3 :)
person MitoSanu
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! Blues just did that?! Kewl! Go red dude! He so hot! Can't stop imagining the part of Saito-chan's eyes turning blank. Actually I can! YOu go dudE!!!!!!
person Reihikari001
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I choose a maid. I hope the sequel comes soon!
person Miko102
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH... now I get it. Sorry for being a bit... slow. It was like 2 am in the morning and I was doing my hw. Evil teachers... anyways I choose maid. I can imagine Netto now.*laughs*
person Miko102
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess it's okay... I wonder... are you going to have a sequeal after this? I wonder what's Enzan doing Netto?
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this, although I never imagined Blues as THAT domineering. O_O I'd like to see what's happening with Netto and Enzan.

Oh, and maid >:]
person Rose Kitsune.EXE
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, *looks around skittishly* This isn't quite my cup of tea, but for the type of fic it was well written. As for your poll... Close, so close... Dog. *runs like hell*
person animelover
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story!!!! although, it never hit me that protoman could be an evil seme. oh well, it was still hot. oh yeah, and about the poll, i vote for Netto being a maid. it appeals more than the dog, and i can actually see Netto wearing one. hope theres a sequel!!!
person The Yaoi Mistress
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!! thas was so cool! the feelings, the emotions, the sadomasoquist (as it is that it is written), you have to write about Enzo and Netto!!!

About the poll: a maiden!!!! sorry but i have a little fetichims about bishonens wearing girls clothes :P I cannot avoid it! but a dog it doenst soon bad, do you want to hurt Netto as much as you hurt Saito?

you can send me the answere at this question then i can give you an answer.

see you