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for Camping

by lolchan

person Anon
schedule December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting, in a really good way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person White Dragon
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ack! *dies*

Quick! Chapter two!! =^_^= whoot! I love it! netto and Yuu are so cute together they need more fics.
person Sgt. Frog Fangirl
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down and claps* Yay! Some nice father-son SMUT!! *blush* Please write more!! ;3
person Toki
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grin* *eeeevil grin* hehehheh. nice fic
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"You're going to give me the sex-talk, aren't you?" *giggles*

Maa...I liked this story (as a PWP, mind you), though there were definitely both pros and cons. First off the character were, as other have remarked before me, very "in character", at least from my point of view. Also, the smut was good, and kinda proper. ^.^ Also, putting Netto and Yuuichiro together is a good idea in the first place.

The most remarkable con for my part: the very convenient chain of events that led up to this "educational measure": the rain, the soaked duffel bag...and of course, Yuuichiro's intentions. ~.~ Also, how can you have running water without electricity? Though, all in all, a good fanfic.
person Kazder
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To some of the people who posted before me: Stop being wussies. You liked it, you want more. Don't be shy telling the author you want more, because none of us know you, so you don't have to hide it. >.>
Anyways, I love this story. I came back this morning to see if the second chapter was finished. Alas, it wasn't, but I'm writing this review, so.. Yay. I love how you had Yuuichirou's thought pop up when he agreed to show Netto how men "do it." Second, I love how he acts like a loving father while doing this. *huggles Yuuichirou cause he's DAMN HOT*

Mm, there were a few mistakes (I.E. Quotation marks missing), but even with those mistakes, I give this story five stars!! ^-^
Oh, crap, I've got to write my fan-fic! >.<
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this isn't a pairing one encounters often. But you make it seem plausible.
Hope to see more ^_^
person DC
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well written... It would be interesting to see how another chapter will proceed...
person dip
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blush* um.... could you like... write more?? PLEASE!??? *cough* i mean, the story structure was very well put together as well as the fact the characters were still very much in character durring the whole story. And... JUST WRITE MORE OK!!! *eh hem* i'm sorry. (takes pills) Can't wait to read more of your stufff =3
person Smidge
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... dear god, I never thought I'd read a father/son pairing... much less like it. I feel dirtier than usual after reading one of these stories... ^-^; However, I must say that while it seems totally impossible that it'd ever happen, somehow, you've made it seem slightly plausible. Um... is there going to be a second chapter? ^-^;;;