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by katonkunai

schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ou know what, I saw that you had no reviews for this yet so here you go. This is a very good beginning to the story but in my opinion you get kinda lost in the last three paragraphs (I'm still playing the game so thats probably why : P)Already I can tell that I love James over everyone else so I won't pass up a fic about him. I did enjoy reading this and I can't wait to read more of your things. ^^