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"A feeling of soreness and wetness between her legs woke her up. Ada’s eyes slowly adjusted and scanned the dark room. She was not in same hotel room she went to sleep hours before. She realized that she was naked while her arms and legs were bound to the boards of a large bed. She began struggling to free her wrists until a man with blond hair entered the room and approached her. He wore a dark pair of sunglasses and his mocking grin made her both angry and scared. “You bastard, how dare you do this to me…” she spat at him. He paid her words no mind and lay top of her, petting her breasts roughly until they became sore, his arousal growing with her struggling."

Seems out of place for your story. I though they were on a boat?

Nicely done. The Ada-in-Hunnigan thing is a little weird.

Otherwise, it's a good read.

yay!
i love this story!
i hope you're gonna uptade soon! ^_^

Very nice. I can't express how happy I am to see a Male/Female story based on RE4. All I see on the page mostly is Leon/Luis, Leon/Saddler and worst. I loved the fact that Ada decided it wasn't over just yet, you definately have her character down. Great job! Need A Ride? Our love starved duo definately did...

*slams head into desk* Holy shit. I've been waiting for this story for God knows how long. And while I hardly ever review, I really want to encourage you to continue. (Please write more. Please?!) I expect you will, but letting you know you've got a highly appreciative audience couldn't hurt. It's too bad I can't write sex for shit or I would have already amassed a huge library of Ada/Leon smut. But now I have you! Great job. You made my day.