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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great great story. Descriptive. Flourishing with details. And knew your stuff, good job. Mind if I continue this?
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Pretty good, actually. Just a few critiques; nitpicks, really.
As I understand it, The End never used real bullets; also, when you kill his parrot, he gets royally ticked off. And Big Boss didn't earn the moniker of 'Saladin' until the 80's or so, I'm pretty sure. Well after Operation Snake Eater.
The story itself is top-notch. Keep it up!
As I understand it, The End never used real bullets; also, when you kill his parrot, he gets royally ticked off. And Big Boss didn't earn the moniker of 'Saladin' until the 80's or so, I'm pretty sure. Well after Operation Snake Eater.
The story itself is top-notch. Keep it up!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, how suspenseful!! I can't wait to see the rest!