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for Love or Dare?

by JimilliaWilson

person AtsimFrotw
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grr, Riku won't go through with it, right? Oh, did you notice that when you say Sora Hikari in english you get Sky Light? Sounds like a beer to me. Oh well, I liked your story, buy I sense angst on the horrizon! Ahhhh, don't walk into angst! Run! Please make me laugh for a while, laughter is always harder to find than tears. Good luck!!!!
person T.K-kun
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting! keep up the plot and suspence. i do want to know what happens on the longer
encounter with riku and sora. =o this is a great start so far. good luck and UPDATE SOON!
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mimi: Playing around with Riku is fun^^
Kai: You do realize he'll probably kill you now, not that I'd care....
Mimi: I love living life on the edge^^
Kai: -rolls eyes- Yeah, sure. Remember that this was your idea not mine.
Mimi: Anywho, plushies for you^^
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mimi: Poor Sora
Kai: -snorts-You always feel sorry for characters that have bad luck in love.
Mimi: How can I not? I try to be optimistic and caring, unlike you^^
Kai: -pulls out rifle- Die!!
person Artemis
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
both chapters were nice....mean Vixal...mmm but it was cute *claps* Yay make more chapters ^^