rate_review Reviews

That's hot... I really loved this fic. Hope to read more from you in the future.

I loved it! It was really well done. Though Torn and Jak are my first fav couple, you can't help but love Jinx with Jak!!! Yah! Keep up the great work! Do a Torn and Jak for me...please?

shit, I loved it! This smut really made my day! And I love how you still managed to keep them in character. That was really a nice touch. ;) Excellent work!

I can't believe I read this. But I had to XD;; (*has SERIOUS Jak-uke issues*) But you made it lovely enough that I didnt mind at all! Oh, such a lovely, smutty piece! BEAUTIMOUS!

Jinx was perfect. Absolutely perfect! His dialogue made me just.. CRACK UP laughing. He's so blunt and callous! You really made him come alive, and I was so eager for more :3 All the clipped ways you described him- smokey, gravelly, rough- just made it seem vuuuurryvuuurry real, and with such beautiful imagery! The atmosphere was GORGEOUS (The lights buzzing on- dim and seedy? Call me SOLD. That was just nummy XD; ) and I just had to read all of it. Hot, smexy sex. VERY descriptive and delishuz, obviously! And Im not usually a PWP person!

For your first fic in this verse, you have blown away the efforts of some people who've been rutted in this fandom for 2+ years o___o Needless to say, you ROCK. :9 *gives due appreciation*

Jaygoose will absolutely lose it XD She will. Trust me.

Okay, I said it once before and I'll say it again. I fucking love you. *loves and holds you against your will*