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for The Darker Side of War

by NoiseTank13

person Ecchi Baka Kon
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o;;;;;;;; wow hot, i like it <3 i love unusual pairings, keep up teh good work and udpate soon V^_^
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting piece. You manage to make a troll female sexy. I like your style very much. Keep up the good work.
person Akimia Hoshino
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and exotic. I'm finding the story and descriptions to be somewhat cliche, though. Also, I find that using fewer slang terms for the sexual parts of the body make for a more arousing description, but that's just my opinion. Not bad overall! Hope you keep working on it!
person john the heavy
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say. The sex scene was incredibly erotic and I liking the theme of the story. UPDATE SOON! ^^
person Sarge
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mournestone eh? sounds similar to Arthas weapon Frostmourne iknow this stuff since i play warcraft 3 both versions ill be back and btw nice job
person Church
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE YES WARCRAFT FIC DA T IS COOLIO WOOT!!!!!! Ima tell my friends about dis so dey cant review for you later
person Hell Knight
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic cant wait for update i lik the short lemon or so der an im wondern if ur gonna put some battles in it it wuld be great see ya
person Hippy of the futre
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude another fic dat is like marijuana an i can smoke it to please me YES!!!!
person Valkyrie Of The Sky
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that intimate scene actually got me wet a bit keep it up
person I bang it
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BANG IT DANG dis is pimp i swear to god update soon