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for Silver and Charcoal

by Rafaelle

person Anonymous Pricky
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering..is this fic done/complete?

It isn't made clear>?

Sorry if my english is bad.. if you're wondering why I ask ; I only read complete stories.

Thx.. A P ;)
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The WaFF and angst is choking me.
And I will only breathe again when you post some more.
So, you will kill me if there is a lack of posting.
I dun wanna die.
But it would be all your fault.
person Kristen
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, those 2 chapters are really well done! Awesome, you better make the next chapter soon! Email me when you put it out! ;)
person Siarra
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this seems to be the beginnings of one truly epic story. I've read quite a few fics about their past but none have been as thorough as this, with so much depth to it. I also very much like the way you've changed the traditional character roles, making Kazuya the more open one and Lee the sullen one. A brave move and so far it's working great. Your writing style is also a sheer pleasure to read; every sentence is well thought out and gives the genuine feeling of a very good book. It's a shame I can't stay up all night just to read this one but I'll be more than happy to wait for the next chapter, which I hope is every bit as good as this one.
person exit
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your novel very good, I'm happy about yours~
person Tomeka
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! I hope you continue soon.