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for One Sad Summer

by Sapphirexkat2

person Yami
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say have Vergil sneak outta his school. And that was sexxxy! XD Nice job, and keep it up!
person Rotharell Jenova
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He, he...make Dante desparate! Let him "visit" Vergil. It seems more interesting. I mean, Vergil is pretty much smart so he sneaks out of camp with ease. But Dante's a little....... Well, anyway, it would be fun to see what Dante would do.
person Cidsa
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I like :D
What I'm wondering is why those two share the same bed, wouldn't Eva notice? XD

Anyways, having Vergil just appear in the middle of the night in Dante's room would pretty cool, but it's up to you. Continue the story at least! :3
person Elysium
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my :-D i loved it. I like the idea of Dante sneaking into, since he's more of the type to do that... >XD brilliant!
person Seeker
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say have Dante go 'visit' Vergil! I liked this alot it was very...sexy. Great writing, details and descriptions. Your great, thanks for sharing and yeah if you can't tell from the first line I'd like if you guys continued. Oh! And sorry this wasn't a longer review but I don't know what else to say other than that I really enjoyed it and appreciate your posting this delightful fic!

~Seeker
PS Summer school? Vergil doesn't need it and I hate school, it sucks! But it does make for an...'interesting' story. Oh, and spelling, grammer ect really fine except for a few things but they can slide. Like your stuff keep it ^up!
person teh unknown
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should have Vergil sneak out of the summer program thing-a-ma-bob. ^_^
person Ri
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Oh please write both versions! Heh I just can't get enough. Great job! I hope you do write another chapter or maybe both ideas. ^^ i would love to read that. Heeee. Anyways bravo!
person VergilsGirl
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah..have him sneak out..that seems so unlike him dante will never see it coming..hehehe mmmm twins
person Liebchen
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*_____* *drools* My gwad... that was veeeeeeery hot!! A sexually frustrated Dante is a... *smirk* very very hot Dante! Continue please!
And I'm for option two!^^ 'Cause I would love to see a 'WTF...? Dante's here?' expression on Verges face! ^^
person Dullahan
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD I think Dante sneaking out would be WAY more fun. The act of getting caught would really up the sexiness... XD