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for One Sad Summer

by Sapphirexkat2

person absolute_zero
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fuckin hot! Oh please, I'm beggin U continue. Have Vergil sneak into the house and surprise Dante in his sleep. That would be hot! lol! I'm gonna stop talkin now before I say something stupid.
person Unanimous
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was... really hot. o_o
More!

Humm... I like it if Dante went to see Vergil in this vacation thingy-whatcha-macall-it. The feeling of getting caught.. creates.. uh... I dunno. I'm not good at this stuff.

But... MORE! :O~~~
person DevilDantesGurl
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! Well I don't think you can just leave poor Dante like that can you? Or Vergil for that matter. I throughly enjoyed this quick little story of yours and I'd love to read more if you were to continue. I happen to like the idea of Dante going to meet Vergil, he seems like the one to chase after his brother. Which he does in the game anyway! If the shoe fits hmm?
person LDG (Legendary Dream Girl)
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! I Think Vergile should sneak and visit Dante! ^_^
person pink_rain
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is was awesome! You should continue but have vergil come back :DD <3
person Rose
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vergil comes back and surprises Dante by tying him up and doing naughty things to his brother!
person LuluS
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, are you gonna have Vergil turn up or Dante go to him. It seems so unfair to leave him hanging...

person cas (2 lazi 2 log)
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ that was hott! Omg you can bet that I'm going to be reading this over and over agin. Spicey! Very delicious! O_o I think you should have Dante visit Vergil. Omg That would be the sexiest thing ever! You did an awesum job! I can't wait for the next chappy! *two thumbz-up*
person Leoth
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
add more ^^ im soooo addicted now lol.
person Koinu
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They need to get together somehow...though not sure how. But I hope we get a second chapter soon! *grin*