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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I literally gasped at the end!! So hot! hehe OMG I soo love this story!! The verbal and silent banter between Zelos and Kratos is soo delicious, really its awesome. Wonderfully written hun. Can't wait for more ^___^
*huggles*
*huggles*
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this. Whee! You're so good with discriptions and stuff. Hehe, Kratos and Zelos are going on a road-trip together, joy!
I'm a little confused about the endning though. Was the "Oh Kratos" Zelos moaning without realizing it, or was the coming from the other room. If it's the latter than that would mean Kratos and Yuan would totally have to be doing it and that would totally be alright with me. But yeah, hope it's the former cause then I'd feel bad for poor ol' Martel.
I'm a little confused about the endning though. Was the "Oh Kratos" Zelos moaning without realizing it, or was the coming from the other room. If it's the latter than that would mean Kratos and Yuan would totally have to be doing it and that would totally be alright with me. But yeah, hope it's the former cause then I'd feel bad for poor ol' Martel.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your style. It's only just begun (I hope) and I can already tell that it's muh favourite!
Payment will be 10 thank you's for every chapter. lol
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x10
Payment will be 10 thank you's for every chapter. lol
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x10
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job handling Kratos, Yuan, and Martel and thier interactions. Like it lots. Mwhaha, Kratos is really good in this. Aw...poor Milly. Zelos is really starting to feel inferior, isn't he? Anyway, can't wait for the next part. I love you, you're so good. <3333
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love your descriptions. But also I totally dig seeing Yuan and Martel together I always wondered how'd they be together and you gave me a view. AWESOME! The build up is really good so far too..I sense a lot more to come from this story weee! Can't wait! ^_______^
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE keep writing this. I am smitten. Please. I will pay you. Just keep writing it. PLEASE.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOoo the beginning was naughtay and Zelos falling out of the carriage made me chuckle.
BUT the rest!! *sniffs* poor poor Zelos. Great descriptions ^^ This is an interesting story you got going. A new look at our favourite characters. And boy to think we both wrote such a similar action for our stories 0.0 But you did it very well VV Can't wait to see what happens weeee!
BUT the rest!! *sniffs* poor poor Zelos. Great descriptions ^^ This is an interesting story you got going. A new look at our favourite characters. And boy to think we both wrote such a similar action for our stories 0.0 But you did it very well VV Can't wait to see what happens weeee!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, can't wait to see more ^^