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for A Mercenary and A Nobleman

by fairyvicki

person Petrez
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how this one isn't as deprssing as the other... ^_^ (Kratos/Zelos pairing is the best)
person Jenny
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God I just figured it out! LMAO! I thought that Kratos walked in on Zelos, which would explain the "Oh, Kratos!" lol I had no idea. Ish it Yuan? XD
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I hope you couintinue!
person Jenny
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is this delay??! Is it because I have failed to contribute my traditional thank you's?? Do I really affect you that much? XD
I still love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for being awesome x10!
person Kite
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFL!! That's wonderful, can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Kami-sama
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!Please write more! I am absoulutly in love with this fic,but mostly how you portreyed Zelos's character.Thanks you very much for the good fic.
person Wings
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the first time i've read any of your work, and i think i'm in love ^-^ everyone is very in-character (which i don't see often) and your style/wording is amazing. it makes me very happy to read your story. please write more soon!
person Lys
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. The end of chapter 3 made me go "O_O". Is Martel cheating on Yuan.. or vice versa? Heh, either way I wouldn't mind.

But yah, I just sat here reading this whole fic first thing in the morning, and I love it. You write very well, and I love your interactions between the four characters. Also, I love KxZ, so I can't wait until they're alone together.. this should get even better very soon, methinks.

Update soon, I'll be eagerly awaiting it!
person RavenGhost
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is REALLY good! Yet funny. Kratos dancing? Heh...I'm having a hard time seeing that, but all in all, it's good! Plesae update! This is really good!

RavenGhost
person Cidsa
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eee, I need more of this story~
I've really enjoyed it so far, I'm curious to see what happened there at the end.
Please write more :D