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for A Mercenary and A Nobleman

by fairyvicki

person Invader Meow (who hasnt made an account here yet)
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
meep! so awesomeeee! You write everything perfectly! this is a great great story, please update soon! *wags tail and awaits*
person PLEASE.
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE THIS, PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE.
person Razz
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this was good. I mean really good! Good plot, well written, and you portrayed the characters wonderfully. :) I really hope you update this story again soon, I really enjoyed it, and I really wanna know what happens next! ;)
person Xeora
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon dear. X3
person Jenn
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kewlness!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Jenny
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sob sob* I. Love. This. So. Much. *sob huff sob* Zelos's personality is perfect!! You are perfect!! I almost had a seizure when I saw that you updated. It's impossible to improve anything on this story!
person Paine77
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..I love your writing. It's amazing. The characters are so IN character too. Plus the story is progressing slowly with just perfect speed.

I can't wait to see what else you do to this ^____^
person RavenGhost
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You update! *cheers* So...Martel called out Kratos' name.........*shifty eyes* Shhh! You heard nothing! This is very good! I'm so glad you updated! So, PLEASE UPDATE SOME MORE! Toodles!

RavenGhost
person Cidsa
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter! :D
This was really good, I really, really hope you write more soon!
Waiting for this one was like torture, hehe.

person Satanic Mechanic
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I love this story so much, it just keeps getting better. And that was still a quick update for someone who has been out of a computer for a week. The Kratos/Zelos interaction was great btw (and Zelos fantasizing about Kratos/Yuan..mwhahaha...) and you know, the Kratos/Martel thing is strangely sweet. More please! ^_~