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by gabrielknight

person animekid
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man this is pretty good

please make more; i don't see A/R a lot lately, just XIII goodness :)
person nininini
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update ya? ^^
person Miaren
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the prologue - it's really got me interested in what happens next. There was only one thing that jarred me: At one point you use the word "statuesque", which means "tall", to describe Riku, and by context I'm guessing that you're referring to his paralysis and not his height. Other than that, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this one.