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for Pride: Continued

by yf17

person capcomfreak4life
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Ryan
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. As good as the original, if not better. Although I have to wonder why Ryu didn't come when Chun did that last time before she went into dreamland. Said dreamland might be a good place to start the next chapter with. Even if that gets rather wierd, you can say it was just a dream.
Any complaints that previous reviewers had were well adressed and the situation very much improved upon over the original. Only one question remains to be asked. Will Chun-Li ever get around to kicking Ryu's ass for all that happened on this day?
person Dream
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooooooo good. Very well written and the "events" were very nice as well. Great job, please continue ^.^