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for Tenebrae

by Raptor6411

person Anon
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like how this is going. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
person Mr E
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't find the sex scene!
person DEathCab
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is tastefully done and you explain the story so well! You give the characters actual substance and leave the reader wanting more, because I know I do. I'm not a real fan of Leon/Ashley but this is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm drooling over your adjectives and descriptions right now... yay for SAT words! Haha.

I love this story. Though it skips a few of my favorite parts (such as Leon attacking Ada), it's great. I admit Ashley isn't my favorite character (far from it, actually), but you made her really sweet when she needed to be. I just wish there had been a little more character development, like with Krauser and such. But oh well, it still rocks. I hope we'll be seeing more chapters soon! Or a sequel. :)

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person Traci
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope oyu write more to this :) I really enjoyed it :)
person Echelon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...wow. This is one of the better Ashley/Leons I've read in a long while. The characterization is intriguing, the writing is descriptive, and as a result, I am utterly hooked. As much as I love the introspection and action during the game-centric moments, I *adored* the post-game scenario: not many fics realistically tackle what might happen to Leon and Ashley after their odyssey, and how their perspective of each other might change once they're out of panic-mode. I look forward to seeing more of this story, so please, please update soon!
person Luky
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job! I can't believe I didn't notice this story! Wonderful to see a new Ashley/Leon story! It's left me off at such a great point! I'm really hoping for a new chapter soon!

Thanks for the lovely comment on Resillient Strengths! I look forward to mutual fandom ^^
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am only on chapter three, but I am enjoying what I a mreading so far. I'll leave a proper review when I reach chapter 6. Just wanted to say good job so far!