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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi I was just thanking you for your support on my story Wake up! I really love this one and it's great to get a review from someone about it who also wrote a story similiar to that. I absolutely loved yours when I read it and I hope you can like mine as well! Here is to Ashley/Leon!!!
-Luky
-Luky
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! Though I'm not particularly a fan of a Leon and Ashley pairing, I am now definitely for sure a fan of your writing. You have a knack for describing scenes without going too much into unneccessary details, allowing the reader to fill in the rest.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I've bookmarked my page, if you will, of this story, and I figured a review might be in order.
I've been looking for an Ashleon (Ashley X Leon) fic, and this is the first one I found. I have to say that I'm quite impressed with your work thus far. Truth be told, I found it a little blunt, which was a bit of a put-off for me, but the fact remains that I can't stop reading it. Being blunt or out in the open isn't really my thing, but it works for you, so go with it.
I'm quite impressed with your work, especially 'Implosion'. Your writing seemed rushed and awkward at their moment (I mean it in a good way, because it fit in perfectly with the mood). Aside from a few grammatical errors and a couple of typos (I'm a real stickler for writing, even on my work), you've done a great job so far. Congratulations!
I've been looking for an Ashleon (Ashley X Leon) fic, and this is the first one I found. I have to say that I'm quite impressed with your work thus far. Truth be told, I found it a little blunt, which was a bit of a put-off for me, but the fact remains that I can't stop reading it. Being blunt or out in the open isn't really my thing, but it works for you, so go with it.
I'm quite impressed with your work, especially 'Implosion'. Your writing seemed rushed and awkward at their moment (I mean it in a good way, because it fit in perfectly with the mood). Aside from a few grammatical errors and a couple of typos (I'm a real stickler for writing, even on my work), you've done a great job so far. Congratulations!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Caleb (may I call you that?), I've finished reading Tenebrae, and I must tell you that what I read after 'Implosion' was something I totally didn't expect.
The whole 'free-writing' thing somewhat reminds me of those crazy flashes of images (I'm not sure if you watch animé, or if you do, you've watched Evangelion) from Neon Genesis Evangelion, or more to the point, the music video of the series to the song 'Breathe' by Prodigy (see www.animemusicvideos.org for that animé music video. You'll see what I mean about halfway into it).
Anyway, getting back to my review, it was a bit of a stretch to see Ashley acting like a teenager, but then again, she's the President's daughter, so there's no point in me criticizing it, is there? :)
I actually enjoyed how you gave them a relationship that has Leon confused, not just because of their titles, but because there is a connection between two people in a life-and-death situation, and the 'what now's of said relationship really keep a bystander wondering.
I know I'm probably babbling, but you've done a great job with your story on the whole, and congratulations on a job well done!
-- SFC Omicron
The whole 'free-writing' thing somewhat reminds me of those crazy flashes of images (I'm not sure if you watch animé, or if you do, you've watched Evangelion) from Neon Genesis Evangelion, or more to the point, the music video of the series to the song 'Breathe' by Prodigy (see www.animemusicvideos.org for that animé music video. You'll see what I mean about halfway into it).
Anyway, getting back to my review, it was a bit of a stretch to see Ashley acting like a teenager, but then again, she's the President's daughter, so there's no point in me criticizing it, is there? :)
I actually enjoyed how you gave them a relationship that has Leon confused, not just because of their titles, but because there is a connection between two people in a life-and-death situation, and the 'what now's of said relationship really keep a bystander wondering.
I know I'm probably babbling, but you've done a great job with your story on the whole, and congratulations on a job well done!
-- SFC Omicron
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. The hours were not wasted at all--indeed, if I hadn't been reading this story I would doubtless be reading something that would have had less caliber. Thank you =)
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story and one of my favorite pairings.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, keep up the good work.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I am loving this story. Mabey even put part of the story in Ashly's point of veiw.
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read many stories on this iste but this is my first comment. Mostly because this is the first story that I have actually enjoyed for reasons besides the obvious.
I offer my best compliments to the author, as I enjoyed this story very much, for many reasons. The author has made what is often little more than an excuse to put fantasies into words, an actual good story with realistic characters, feelings, dialogue, and a good deal of restraint. I am very impressed.
Mickey
I offer my best compliments to the author, as I enjoyed this story very much, for many reasons. The author has made what is often little more than an excuse to put fantasies into words, an actual good story with realistic characters, feelings, dialogue, and a good deal of restraint. I am very impressed.
Mickey
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, um interesting story
Didnt realize that Resident Evil could be seen in such a exciting light
Very descriptive
Didnt realize that Resident Evil could be seen in such a
Very descriptive