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by Cheeky

person Nutsy the one and only
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh these are too FUNNY! Here is a thought though if you don't mind.
Scene Riku Kiari and Sora are reunited. (I am sure that happens. Is this KHI or KHII I forget) Sora runs to right to them slips and huggs and kisses Riku instead of kiari.

I just thought that would be silly.
person Blackdiamond Princess (too lazy to log in)
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This must be the most hilarious thing I've read in a while! It's so much fun!
BTW, M.D Sora had some pretty good ideas there, each funnier than the other! I'm definetly going to be looking out for this one!

Keep it up!
-BDP
person silver_kitune
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol This is hilarious. Keep it up! I swear I will read and review AAALLLL of it!! ^_^
person Classy Raven
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL falls back from laughing
awsome keep it up,
person Andie
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ye gods of comedy! This is hilarious! I normally don't like script-format stuff, but this is okay. I would also normally give you suggestions on improving, blah, blah, blah, but since this is all just crazy goofiness I'll let it all slide!

Besides, you're pretty good.
person bawk
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny stuff. Next chapter you should have the scene where Ansem gives Sora the whole soeech about the door and have Sora fall asleep or something like that.
person bawk
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny stuff. Next chapter you should have the scene where Ansem gives Sora the whole soeech about the door and have Sora fall asleep or something like that.
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please more, please more! They were so funny!
person Ecstasy
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL this is effin' HILARIOUS. WOO.... please update soon. I'm Lovin' it so far. :)
person lilc
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!

This is really funny! Great job!