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LOL. That was beautiful. Though I didn't say I wanted a sex scene, (though it would be nice) I just said that I thought you had mentioned something about one in the prologue of an earlier chapter. I love the plot twists and karma based events. I even wrote my own story as I read further into "At The End Of The Tunnel". With my own characters, and if I ever post it I will create you for the inspiration.

I love the story I can't help but read it. The further you go the more I want. Though didn't you say something about a sex scene at the beginning of one of the other chapters.

Oh ho ho ho, nice. The corruption of the Kingdom revealed... More suspense builds, before Geoff gets what was coming to him, Max dies literally at Breech's hands... And James, now certainly a fugitive, no longer cares, and will go wherever the wind... and Breech will take him. And Robotnik dying? Nice. But somehow, knowing ol' Buttnik, it's probably one of his clever ruses. Factory accident? Pshaw. But if he's really dead, that's good, too. Means Needlenose may get his chance, but that's up to you guys. Excellent chapter.

Sorry I was late to reviewing ^^; I had Recently moved to a new house and I couldnt get my internet up for like a month and a half. Anyway onto the reveiw of all the new chapters! I never thought id say this but I like this more then U.B.:3 . It must really pay off to work with a partner huh? I have to say I feel sorry for poor james and breech but hey atleast breech got what she's been wanting. Now I would go into a reveiw of every chapter but im faar to lasy for that. Heh thats prolly why I dont make fanfics myself. Anyway cant wait to see what happens next!

What a lovely chapter... an endearing nightmare sequence, more Robotnik bastardry than you can shake a sword at, the retrurn of the mysterious figure who now seems to know quite a bit about James... A on-toes-keeping chapter that has answers but yet doesn't. Very good.

Spectacular chapter. A bit more of Breech's sordid history revealed, and more on what makes her tick.

It just keeps getting better and better. :3

Oh ho ho ho, nice. Short, but sweet. Robotnik's such a bastard. Now not only has James "betrayed" the Acorns, but he actually thought he would have killed the kid as well, just to appease the doctor, just to find out Robobutt was fucking with him. And now, Robotnik will make sure James stays in line with the mystery figure, heheh.

And yeah, the other readers need to start reviewing every once in a while! It feels odd being the only one reviewing this brilliance.

Mhm, mhm... Good, good, good... So the true intereaction between James and Breech begins now. Teaming up to supposedly infiltrate Buttnik, very nice. And either something's not right with Max, or he's just evil for this story. Intrigue, intrigue. Weaving a fantastic story.

More, more.

Hmm, quite good, this. An intriguing, dark-ish story, and a a pair of quite intersting main characters. Kepe up the good collaborative work! :3

Like usual, a great peice of work - and all those years of RPing do pay off; in FanFics! GASP!
But otherwise a good story, and I look foward to seeing more, keep up the good work and good lucky.

Hurrah for RP Spin-Off's, eh?