rate_review Reviews

Hey, I used to be known as "Not Given" because I didn't have an account on here yet. I made an account especially for your stories ( yeah, I like em that much) and wanted to let you know that I think this story is possibly the best one I've read so far. Even with the limited sex. =] I dunno, maybe it's just because it's not so bitter of a story or something. More of my style I guess. It's been great so far and you really know how to make a good villain(Cur). Consensual sex is much better than rape too. For the constructive criticism part... I'd have to say that the only thing I found was some of the spelling. Hey, it's gotta be hard to look over a whole book and find a few misspelled words. Keep it coming. Oh, and when will there be more Universe Backstabber?

I'm seeing several flaws in this story just on the first chapter...

Tails' parents are named Amadeus and Rosemary.

The leader of the Acorn Royal Guard is... Ok, somehow I forgot his first name. But it's Antoine's father. General something DeCoolette.

Sorry about not reviewing chapter 14. But I just got to reading it. For that I will review both with this review.
Chapter 14: It was okay I knew I would come to truly hate Curtis. But it left me with an empty feeling like something was missing.
Chapter 15: It was awesome (Now I know what really happened to shadow at the end of SA2, jk.), though I must say I am curious what happened to two of the Chaos Emeralds. Also will you be bringing in the Master Emerald or no.

Well THAT sure thew me for a loop. But a very interesting surprise, nonetheless. And the end of the chapter.... oh boy, that's quite the cruel cliffhanger. But, with cruel cliffhangers, you know something awesome awaits after. :D

And once again another couple of chapters I cant find many complaints for! Nice touch with the whole ark/shadow thing. I didnt see it comming thats for sure! mmmmmk I must say i have a couple of ideas on curt but I wont share them. Any way I cant wait to read more but I guess I will. huh?

Ack! I got lax in reading this. So sorry. ^^;

Anyhow, I can tell already that Curtis is a bastard near through and through. From when he was just the mystery character in the shadows, he's someone who would betray anyone to get in his way. And these two chapters just reinforce it all the more. Seems he and Breech have a bit of a past, which has me all the more intrigued. Something tells me we're in for a blow us out of our seats twist soon enough.

And now espionage, Chaos Emeralds, and the Dark Legion (or so it seems) have been thrown in the mix. Excellent. I can't wait to see what you will do with this.

Another couple of chapters and I am still loving this as much as ever. nothing in paticular to comment about this time though so keep it up!

It's Armageddeon, cats and dogs getting along. lol, I love the steady building relationship. And I believe I hate Curtis for the right reasons. I can't wait to see what you do with the chaos emeralds.

This is good! I just read all the chapters. I bet you know me from somewhere (My name will give you a hint).

good, I like to read about fanfics like this. A good mix of sex, fighting, killing, and blood. Plus some drugs and alchohol.

I rated it a 4 out of 5.

Wahoo, more character development! More common ground, a litle bit of angst, and some karma to boot. And good ol' Buttnik still lives. A factory accident isn't gonna be the end of him! And we meet that figure who's been hiding out at last, and a new mision to be had with. Who needs sex when you've got all this excitement?