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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeee!!!!! I read the one you had on fanfic.net but this was WWWAAAAAAY better!!!! Heheheeheh!!!!!!! (maybe its the added hentai, heeheehee) Yay!!! I will die--DIE, DO YOU HEAR?!--if you don't update soon!!! Weeee!!!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Took Kratos' foot lotion? O.O Oh! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THREESOME! THREESOME! THREESOME!!!!!
That was AWESOME! Totally random, but AWESOME nonetheless!!! You have to continue this story!
That was AWESOME! Totally random, but AWESOME nonetheless!!! You have to continue this story!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL
Kratos/Yuan/Mithos roomate action=fun stuff. Keep going with this, you're doing a great job!
Oh and I just realized where I recognized your penname from. Another fellow yugioh writer! *whoot*
Kratos/Yuan/Mithos roomate action=fun stuff. Keep going with this, you're doing a great job!
Oh and I just realized where I recognized your penname from. Another fellow yugioh writer! *whoot*
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.........That was funny, and kawaii, sortof...*blinks* Well...UPDATE! PLEASE!? I really like this! Toodles!
RavenGhost
RavenGhost
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was VERY GOOD! *smiles* Please update! I can't wait for more! Toodles!
RavenGhost
RavenGhost
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's so cute! Yay for Yuan! Can't wait for more from you! (And maybe another chappy ^_^)
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was ... beautiful.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job, great job. Liked it a lot!!
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I was so hoping you would do this. And it was exactly how I wanted it too, role reversal! This chapter was alot more emotional than the last, I like it very much. And this paragraph;
"Now, after one lives for a good four thousand years, he or she would naturally become good at something. Yuan happened to be good at a whole lot of somethings, but this was very high on his list. In fact, I would even guess that by now Yuan could read a newspaper, paint a masterpiece, learn how to play the lute, and all the while give someone excellent head."
Was perfect! Lol. The last paragrah was also nice, very well thought out.
"Now, after one lives for a good four thousand years, he or she would naturally become good at something. Yuan happened to be good at a whole lot of somethings, but this was very high on his list. In fact, I would even guess that by now Yuan could read a newspaper, paint a masterpiece, learn how to play the lute, and all the while give someone excellent head."
Was perfect! Lol. The last paragrah was also nice, very well thought out.