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by Elklodge

schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wrote a fic of Ivy dying a brutal death.

But I must warn you, it is not for the squeamish.
person BRP
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
1) I admire Ivy.
2) I like Cervantez.
3) Rick, firey, hellish imagery. I could imagine it.
4) I liked the sex, but not rape, and not between family members.
5) I didn't like that Ivy got peed on.
6) I do feel bad for victims of real life abuse. Writers and readers should be more gentle with them.
7) I creeped out on people having sex, and their body parts broke then melded back together.
8) I would like to read more romantic, heated tales.
9) I would like to read more of this tale. Mayhaps Ivy does it, willingly, with other characters? Ex- Please read a story in Spider Man section called Mary Jane: Super Whore.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story lacked coherent thought toward the end and besides nightmare would have probably been there and gone ape shit on cervantes' ass for touching his woman, i mean honestly you dont expect nightmare to just sit there and not kill the pathetic worm
person Not.Impressed.
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You deserve all the flames you get.Sicko.
person EatNYu
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say.....PWP.....thats all i can say..............
person Jennifer
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Voldo's a hideous character.
person She Who Smokes Bitches
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! It's your fic, continue to write it however you like. I personally thought it was kind of funny -- it could use a little more blood and gore. Any way update soon. And to all you little bitch ass flamers...Fuck yall.
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, did soneone hold a gun to your guy's head and make you read this?
I thought not.

SO LEAVE THIS POOR GUY ALONE. SHEESH!
person VortusTheUndying
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad someone wrote a NC17 story about my favorite Soul Caliber fighter. The only nitpicking thing I would tell you is to spell a few words better. Please ignore people like Anon, stories like this are all over this website you aren't the only one writing stuff like this. Please continue writing and do not look back.
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just sick. There needs to me more stories about love and romance and less stories of violence and torture. Do you condone torture and murder?
My father would burn me with his cigarette butts when I was little and I was an abused child. I think stories of people suffering and being violently killed is wrong.

God made love, Jesus spread the word, in fact, Jesus died for all your sins, he died because there was a lack of love in this world. I bet you grew up to be one cold and heartless person and will die alone like my father did.